Loved ones page 7

Again another piece of your comic coming together, And yet again very well done, And you have shed a little light on what is happening but not too much, You have a lot of potential, please keep up your work, maybe add a little color(VERY TINY BIT) in the next one, if you want that is, It is not my place to say, very well written with the stuttering, as well as the facial expression, please continue your work, I would hate to see so much talent wasted, again I thank you sincerely for your art and your time,

Grog18